poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome!

Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

//tuesday mornings before daycare//
unknown

i strap my
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son
 2
in a shopping
 3
cart
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we wander the
 5
aisles
 6
of wal-mart
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let him
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touch the bristles
 9
of a grill brush
 10
 
 
call out
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the different colors
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of towels
 13
 
 
name the different
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power-tools
 15
he'll never see me
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use
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and when a
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milk-truck
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with a winnebago
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ass
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cuts across our
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path
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we both swivel
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on point
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hot for the
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taste
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of a different
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brand
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