poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

The Thawing
Rull

My wondrous one,
 1
how do you shine so bright?
 2
How can you warm
 3
this cold, cold heart
 4
that froze
 5
so long ago?
 6
 
 
You melt
 7
this berg of tears,
 8
you tender soul,
 9
that imprison me
 10
In bitter ice
 11
and remind me
 12
of glorious days
 13
when love held me
 14
In its arms.
 15
 
 
You chip away
 16
at angers frost
 17
that soothed my hurt
 18
when trust fled
 19
my battered mind.
 20
 
 
My eyes track
 21
your path
 22
to see once more
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love and happiness
 24
side by side.
 25
 
 
With a thawing heart,
 26
I reach for you,
 27
my firey warmth
 28
and spark again
 29
Loves' gentle fire.
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