poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

In Space
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Black and white
 1
Male and female
 2
Young and old
 3
All unite to one nation
 4
With no hate, war, or discrimination
 5
Some day world peace will exist
 6
 
 
Until then, look to space
 7
Space has peace and just one race
 8
There is no black
 9
There is no white
 10
There isn't even day and night
 11
All things in space are alike
 12
 
 
No war, no guns, no knives or spears
 13
No average life span of eighty years
 14
No broken hearts or floods of tears
 15
No blindness or confusion;
 16
everything is clear
 17
But souls can only dream of this here
 18
 
 
Mars and Jupiter hold no grudges
 19
Pluto and Venus no not what love is
 20
Mercury doesn't want to bomb Uranus
 21
Neptune's holding no stars captive
 22
Saturn doesn't think Earth's attractive
 23
They float together; all peaceful planets
 24
 
 
Except Earth, we mess up the pattern
 25
We're the only planet in which race matters
 26
In this solar system we just cause clatter
 27
We're ranked pretty low on the importance ladder
 28
If Earth blew up the rest would shrug their shoulders
 29
"Oh well, we didn't need that useless boulder"
 30
 
 
Looks like the only point this makes
 31
It makes no difference who you are in space
 32

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