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volatile but cool
unknown
not a stranger,	1
so i dont need to run	2
not an enemy	3
so i dont need to kill	4
not a terrorist	5
so i dont need a hunt	6

but she torments me	7
with her body	8
the way she stands	9
the way she talks	10
she tortures my flesh	11

her legs are wide open	12
waiting for my ultimate entry	13
then i drown in between her tighs	14
plucking her strings	15
sucking her grapes	16
as she screams softly	17
into the air	18

the sight of her	19
makes me ache beneath	20
the texture of her breasts	21
makes me want to grab em	22
filling my wine glass	23
with every drop of juice	24

she knows	25
she wants it	26
she thirsts for it	27
but she wants me to hunger for	28
her honey pot	29

the other day we spoke	30
she whispered into the air	31
"make me cream	32
make me scream	33
thats my dream"	34
"cane me hard	35
make me mad	36
for i have been bad"	37

but thats not my dream	38
she wants me for a slave	39
to warm her hole when cold	40
to oil when rusty	41
to stilland steal	42
my deepest creativity	43
and be the first to experience	44
my unique art in sexual acts	45

she wants to read the deepest poetry	46
cumming from within my spirit	47
and form a bond	48
which cannot be broken	49
to steal a part of me away	50
making me tied to her forever	51

seduction,	52
her ultimate plan	53
to draw me to draw her	54
giving me a chance to oil	55
her back	56
and massage her chest	57

watching my flexy wire	58
transform into a curved-rod	59
wishing i could	60
turn her back	61
and spank her for being	62
such a naughty girl	63

but the thought of you	64
turns my eyes away	65
from all these words	66
then i go numb to all her schemes	67
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