poetry critical

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Random Poem:

[.//Insomnia Theatre]
Gabriella

Terrible screeching silence on such a night;
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windows open, talking talking talking.
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Along the street flowed a gusty river of
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letters written in insomnia like zombie scriptures
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at the pace of canes tapping on streets,
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persistent like blind men seeking their homes.
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I sleep under trees of graveyards embroidered with daisies
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fastened just as tightly as pillowed-in ribs
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that are safe and sound in blissful atrophy.
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Their ashes, quaint and small like beetles,
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cover the dirt under soiled bare feet.
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Every day is the same as tomorrow;
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waking up to the saving clock
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consistent like Rixes' suicidal suns.
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I wander from tombs where spirits rest
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to a white walled fortress where spirits linger.
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They hang on red crosses...
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There is a dawning plague skulking, bloodbound,
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in headaches and ripcords,
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taking our "money", taking our "children",
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and any second now we'll cry at last these
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dry burning tears, filthy like syringes brimming with mercury
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and this problem is sitting in the back seats of hatchbacks
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between malicious entwined hands.
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It's something we sort of...encountered along the way...
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Eventually, it meant less and less so we pushed away
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with blemished fingers through stacks and piles of sterile bodies.
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little girls, boys, babies, mothers, fathers: lost.  
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Enter a refuge for denial.
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