poetry critical

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Random Poem:

over a bowl of bitter beans
unknown

I
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The cars that glide past us, and
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The conversation: marrow.
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Nothing, really... nothing really phases me
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as much as his familiar voice
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The tone I do like to think is
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a tone he has chosen solely for me.
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A vocal symphony handpicked for these
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aerial conversations. A sonant  bouquet.
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He makes no eye contact, he simply
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walks and always to a heartbeat rhythm.
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'But that's what makes you live, y'know?
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It's... frightening"
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It lifts the hair on my neck, delicately.
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Makes way down to my spine &
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all the while he speaks of the root,
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the extrication.
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Selfishness for happiness and other
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burdening trade offs.
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In order to blink, divert my attention
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elsewhere in the universe, I would first have
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to pry this face out of my peripheral vision.
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           II
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When he spoke
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lasciviously of human suffering
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He bit into language fervidly,
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maintained alluring rhythm.
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The sentences never staggared.
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Always a concrete, candid opinion that
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I had never tossed to the side alongst the other
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psuedo intellects who strut their lips on a philosophical catwalk.
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No, this had structure. This had origin, but
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maintained unceasing universal understanding.
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Nothing was ever simply... lost.
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Nothing carried itself out and across the sky without having
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sifted through.
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                III
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Never a condescending slip,
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Never a shameless nature.
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Fluid, fluent dialect that
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painted Steinback's landscapes
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in the passing air &
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all I could ever do,
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is blindly chase
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after it's fathomless fade
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