poetry critical

online poetry workshop

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Welcome to Poetry Critical, an online poetry workshop. To post your own poetry, rate that of others, or start a new thread on the message board, you'll need to create a user id by typing a name and password in the box above and hitting 'New User'. If you just want to critique or jump into the discussion, however, you can do that without logging in by typing your comment in the box under each poem or post.

 
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Random Poem:

My Candy
meghanmidget

I want to put you in my mouth
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and whirl you about my tongue,
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while tasting the sugar fade away.  
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I want to suck on the hardness
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And feel the artificial flavoring
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attach itself to the inside of my cheeks.
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Then, forcing a tight lipped smile
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at the thought of your sugar rush,
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I'll suck on your succulent candy, without rest.
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